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                <title>Orchard Farming</title>

                <author>Baroness Elsa von Freytag-Loringhoven</author>
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                        <rdg wit="#va4"><del>LORE </del> Orchard </rdg>
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                                <del>CONSOLING STUPID</del>
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                                <del>WHO HAS</del>
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                                    <del>WICH BEARS</del>
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                                <del>SPRING</del>
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                            <rdg wit="#va2 #va3 #va4">SHALL BE </rdg>
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                                <del>GIVEN </del>
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                            <rdg wit="#va2 #va3 #va4">BURNING. </rdg>
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                                <emph rend="underline">IN CON<del>SEQUENCE</del>
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                                <add>GLOSSGREEN</add>
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                                <del>FOLIAGE <add>GREENERY </add></del>
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                                <del>FROM </del>
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                        <app loc="a63">
                            <rdg wit="#va1">FOLIAGES' </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l n="59">
                        <app loc="a66">
                            <rdg wit="#va3">
                                <del>BENEATH</del>
                            </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va4">BENEATH <add place="below"><del>FRISKY </del>
                                    <add place="below">TRUSTY </add>AFFECTIONATE </add></rdg>
                            <rdg wit="all">SNICKERING </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va2 #va3 #va4">CROWN</rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va2 #va3">S </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <add place="margin">BENEATH </add>
                            </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <add>
                                    <del>PRIDES GREENERY</del> SNICKERING <del>CROWN </del>
                                    <add place="below">CROWNS</add></add>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l n="60">
                        <app loc="a66">
                            <rdg wit="#va1">CROWNS' </rdg>
                        </app>
                        <app loc="a67a">
                            <rdg wit="#va4">LADEN WITH LORE </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l n="61">
                        <app loc="a63">

                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <del>AMONGST PRIDES GLOSSGREEN FOLIAGE</del>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                        <app loc="a69">
                            <rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3">GOSSIPPING </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <add>A TALKATIVE GREENERY </add>
                            </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va2 #va3">GREENERY </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l n="62">
                        <app loc="a69">
                            <rdg wit="#va1">GREENERY <milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>

                    <l n="63">
                        <app loc="a67a">
                            <rdg wit="#va1 #va2">RIFE </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va3">
                                <del>FRISKY</del>
                                <add>RIFE</add>
                            </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va2">WITH LORE </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l n="64">
                        <app loc="a67a">
                            <rdg wit="#va1">WITH </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l n="65">
                        <app loc="a67a">
                            <rdg wit="#va1">LORE <milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>

                    <l n="66">
                        <app loc="a78">
                            <rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3">FRISKS </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va3"><del>GRINS <add>WIPS </add></del><add place="margin">
                                    FRISKS</add> BOSS</rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <del>SQUATS<add> FRISKS</add></del>
                                <add> SQUATS </add>
                                <del>GARDENER</del>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l n="67">
                        <app loc="a78">
                            <rdg wit="#va1 #va2 #va3">BOSS </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <del>BEAMING</del>
                                <add>LORD</add>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                        <app loc="a79a">
                            <rdg wit="#va4">CREATION . </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l n="68">
                        <app loc="a80">
                            <rdg wit="#va1 #va2">MUNCHING </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va3">
                                <del>APPLES </del>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                        <app loc="a78">
                            <rdg wit="#va4"> COCKEARD GRINNING </rdg>
                        </app>
                        <app loc="a80">
                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <add><del>FOR </del> MUNCHING</add>
                            </rdg>
                            <rdg wit="#va1">
                                <milestone unit="stanza"/>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>

                    <l n="69">
                        <app loc="a79a">
                            <rdg wit="#va1">
                                <del rend="overstrike">
                                    <unclear>??</unclear>
                                </del>
                                <add place="above">CREATION </add>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                        <app loc="a80">
                            <rdg wit="#va2">APPLES </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>

                    <milestone unit="stanza"/>

                    <l>
                        <app loc="a63">
                            <rdg wit="#va4"><del>AMONGST</del>
                                <add>FROM </add> PRIDES <del>FOLIAGE</del>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <app loc="a66">
                            <rdg wit="#va4"><del>BENEATH</del>
                                <add>BENEATH</add> SNICKERING <add>BEAMING</add> CROWNS FOLIAGE
                                CROWNS </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <app loc="a69">
                            <rdg wit="#va4">TALKATIVE GREENERY </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <app>
                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <del>AFFECTIONATE</del>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <app loc="a67a">
                            <rdg wit="#va4"><del>LADEN</del>
                                <add>FRISKY</add> WITH LORE</rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <app loc="a78">
                            <rdg wit="#va4"><del>SQUATES</del>
                                <add>GRINS</add> LORD</rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <app loc="a80">
                            <rdg wit="#va4">MUNCHING APPLES</rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <app loc="a78">
                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <del>GRINNING </del>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>
                    <l>
                        <app loc="a78">
                            <rdg wit="#va4">
                                <del>COCKEARD</del>
                            </rdg>
                        </app>
                    </l>


                </lg>
                <closer>
                    <app>
                        <rdg wit="#va1">
                            <emph rend="underline"> E.V.F.L</emph>
                        </rdg>
                        <rdg wit="#va2 #va3">E.V.F.L</rdg>
                    </app>
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